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Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 3:06 pm
by hiitsyuri24
The animals are really cute! I would make the paragraphs same between mobile and computer version.

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:27 pm
by evexhouses
Hey Clara, Your art style is really interesting here. The colors all go very well together. I think maybe you should choose a different color for your body copy though, Great job!!

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:05 pm
by Big_DaDdy
I like your colors Clara. I get this children's book feel from your web layout.
I think putting your Home, Projects, and Links would be better suited at the top and smaller type size.
Maybe revisiting some web design layouts could bring forth some inspiration.

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:08 pm
by veronica chapman
I really love your artwork. I think your right margins need tending, and you're missing some required info.

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:09 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The image choice is very playful, I like the color choices. The thing that I am concerned about is the text flow, the margins should be tighter or perhaps the font smaller?

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:10 pm
by Stasiavous
I love the changes you made to your layout! I agree with Emily - I think you can get rid of the fish - or copy the mobile design with the fish in the bear mouth for the computer design. Awesome job!

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:39 pm
by giusti56
The geometric trees are still one of my favorite things about this design. I like the bears and the whole composition. I think playing with the colors might help a little.

Re: final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:40 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi Clara,
I really like your illustration on your layout. Its really cute!
Jaime