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Re: Final!!

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 8:45 pm
by Jackal
Hi Courtney!

I like your color choices a lot, only thing I would say is to make the type smaller in your body copy. It looks a little too crammed in the square. Cool illustrations tho, nice job!

Re: Final!!

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 11:29 pm
by kj923
Very cool animations! They look like you, impressive!! I love the peach color you chose too! it works nicely with your style

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:28 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
Great job, Courtney! It really came along pretty well! I love your artwork! It is so fun!

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 2:21 pm
by hiitsyuri24
I really like your art and colors! Really cool!

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:45 pm
by evexhouses
I really love your drawings! Super cute, The layouts are easy to navigate and everything is well put together, awesome job!

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:22 pm
by giusti56
Hey, I like your illustrations and how friendly of a vibe they give off. I think little minor things are needed, but more for information and not much for design.

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:29 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Courtney, you're obviously very talented at drawing, awesome stuff.
I think you're over cluttering your web and blocking your drawing with rectangles being too big. I think you can make those boxes smaller and really show off your illustrations.

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:36 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The color choices and the feel of the art tell me a lot about your style! The only thing missing is the placement of each of the parts, I am not sure about the About Me being in such different locations on the mobile and desktop versions it makes more sense closer to the paragraph.

Re: Final!!

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:40 pm
by Stasiavous
I like the changes you made. You should read over your paragraph for grammar and punctuation. Great job!