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Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 9:47 pm
by agostina_renau
I like this very much, however, the dates and text and all the info just look the same.
I think maybe the date should have some kind of different color or whatever, just to Give it Mir hierarchy

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2018 9:53 pm
by Tickosity
I really enjoy your second version. The photo really draws the attention without being too distracting from the rest of the content.

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2018 2:32 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hi Rachel, I'm enjoying your imagery. I think layout one is simplified more and therefore become cleaner and easier to navigate. It is, however, feeling a little unbalanced with so many different typefaces used, I think you can organize your schedule a bit more to give an organized sense of web interaction. Your solid blue box containing your body copy takes away from your design ( I believe). Your scrolling text over your imagery begins to get lost...I'm sure you can come up with a solution :) Layout one is headed is a good direction, hope this helps :)

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:13 pm
by veronica chapman
really love your image. your text box is covering you navigation in your second design.

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:14 pm
by veronica chapman
really love your image. your text box is covering you navigation in your second design.

Re: proj-02-rough-critique

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2018 1:31 am
by matt
I really like how the layout of the first one looks. I like how you put everything into a scroll format instead of on the right like the 2nd layout. it feels a lot more open than the second one.