Re: Project 2
Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2018 5:03 pm
Oh nice! A few different looks here.
I like your "website project 2 example 1.png/picture 4 .png" look the best. The images are striking and give you a large area to fill with whatever content you like. I also like your use of transparency on the top window. You can use something similar for your content on the inner pages. It makes elements in the deisgn paly off of the colors in your images and really ties them to the design. Your type looks good too. It very much fits the tone of a website that offers fun relaxing activities. Your navigation is well placed and easy to see/use. Good use of margin on the content we can see so far.
I'd recommend using a thinner line between your navigation buttons on your computer homepage design. Also, there's no need to crunch your logo on the phone version. Just shrinking it should suffice. I would have liked to see a little more inner page content to better critique these designs, but what I see looks alright.
Nice work!
I like your "website project 2 example 1.png/picture 4 .png" look the best. The images are striking and give you a large area to fill with whatever content you like. I also like your use of transparency on the top window. You can use something similar for your content on the inner pages. It makes elements in the deisgn paly off of the colors in your images and really ties them to the design. Your type looks good too. It very much fits the tone of a website that offers fun relaxing activities. Your navigation is well placed and easy to see/use. Good use of margin on the content we can see so far.
I'd recommend using a thinner line between your navigation buttons on your computer homepage design. Also, there's no need to crunch your logo on the phone version. Just shrinking it should suffice. I would have liked to see a little more inner page content to better critique these designs, but what I see looks alright.
Nice work!