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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2018 1:32 pm
by clawson
All your designs are great and would work. The home01 and 03 look more unique to me and therefore I think they would be better. I like the one color of o1, but I like the 03 design with the colored bar at the top and the better readability of the word "Graphic" Good job

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2018 12:28 pm
by matt
I'm drawn to both- but I do prefer the 2nd design. It just feels more visually appealing than the other. I like how you used type in the title area to take an otherwise kind of boring typeface and create texture and visual interest. Only thing I would change is the navigation could be laid out a little more clearly. But that's just minor stuff. Great job!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2018 4:30 pm
by Stasiavous
I love the second design. The blue is so pleasing and the use of typography is awesome!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2018 2:21 pm
by Instructor
I like your first design the best. The second seems a little too chaotic for me. The first is nice and organized.

You've somehow managed to make the TMCC colors look ... good? Quite a feat in and of itself. I especially like the use of the awful lime/olive as a cobntent highlight color to draw the eye to the main content of each page. I wanted to hate the weird sketchy font you used for your headlines, but it works. It adds a little bit of fun to a nice clean design. I also like your GAMT logo. It plays well with TMCC's questionable logo and shows a bit of what students will be doing in the program. You make good use of contrast so your site is easy to pull information from. Your navigation is easy to see and use. Nice choice with the imagery as well. It illustrates what students will be doing in our classes and the kind of work we expect of them.

I don't know that your bodycopy needs to be quite that bold. I think the lime/olive block does a good enough job of attracting the eye all on it's own. I'd probably bump it up a size or two on your mobile layout in order to be legible.

Nice work!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 3:27 pm
by hiitsyuri24
I like the first set of your design! The colors are really nice and it is really clean! I also like some of the poster have Japanese ;)

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2018 7:09 pm
by veronica chapman
I like your first design. It is easier to follow. Neat and clean.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 6:38 pm
by kj923
I really like the designs with the TMCC green! You made it work really well and I'm excited to see how you execute the final!