PREM CRITIQUE proj 1

[Tickosity]

I think your 2nd designs are the more successful ones for me. I think that the hierarchy could use some work with the headlines and the content, for instance the about me stands out more than the graphic artist title. Otherwise I think the colors work.

[Jaime Ramey]

Hello, I think your design are really nice. I think they both work and if they represent you... then go for it girl!!
Jaime