Project 1 Preliminary Critique

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Tickosity
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Post by Tickosity »

I think I prefer your layout #1. I like the colors and the simplicity with not a lot to distract the eye. However I do think that the navigation links would benefit from a bit more separation from the white portion of the background and maybe tweak the colors of the copy text to increase the contrast. Those are my only ideas when I looked at the layouts.
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erino
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Post by erino »

I like the 2 layout it readable and the use of color is great. It cool how you use the image to incorporate with the gradient design. On the 1 layout I like the bright colors you use, the only suggestion I have at the moment is your name you can try to increase the size or add a shadow to stand out more.
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Jaime Ramey
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Post by Jaime Ramey »

Hi Kaitlin,
I REALLY like the orange and blue design. It really stands out and is eye catching. Maybe you can play with typography a little more. I am sure you are planning on doing more since this is the first critique.
Jaime
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