Re: project 1 preliminary
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2020 8:13 pm
I like both of these. The blue/gray version is a lot more straightforward - but I think if you tweaked the size/spacing of your image in the purple/black design it would still work well.
I would agree with other comments that the body copy text is currently difficult to read in your purple mobile design. However, I think either adding a text box, making the fonts bolder, or moving the image slightly would resolve this.
For you blue/gray design - I think in the mobile version, your 'about me' could be moved up a little bit to balance out the space a little more.
Interested to see the final versions!
I would agree with other comments that the body copy text is currently difficult to read in your purple mobile design. However, I think either adding a text box, making the fonts bolder, or moving the image slightly would resolve this.
For you blue/gray design - I think in the mobile version, your 'about me' could be moved up a little bit to balance out the space a little more.
Interested to see the final versions!