Project 1 Preliminary Critique

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Gr8K8
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

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These are super cute! I love the image you picked. Between the two colors I think I link the pink one more. It unifies the image with the design more than the green I think. For the mobile versions, I would consider moving the links button down slightly to give some breathing room to your email address. I also think incorporating just one other font into the design - perhaps for the headlines/buttons - would help add some more visual interest.
Kaitlin Wallberg

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darth vader de pot noodle
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

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ブリアナは何ですか、これは不気味なWebページの不気味な投稿です。不気味な怖いスケルトンは背筋を震えさせる
yo it me, the green design is more fitting with your character (which is a skelly) but, if you want it to contrast instead then the other one is fine.
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