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Re: Project one Final

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2020 9:53 am
by wilson_iii
Gorgeous color scheme, and I love the illustration! Your site is very pleasing to the eye, except for one thing. Personally, when I look at the text, it kind of shouts at me all at once. I'm a fan of the all caps, but I think it would look better with smaller sized text for your body. As others have mentioned, maybe moving the body text into a more advantageous position will help readability. Perhaps make it look like your illustration is speaking with a text bubble, and use that area for your body copy! That could be interesting. Wonderful work!