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Re: Project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2021 9:33 pm
by Mal-Festio
Hello Arisa,

You did an amazing job with the color in this design, great that you went with this layout.

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 2:22 pm
by it's_crysta
The effect over your name is really cool and it'd be nice to see it in your mobile version and that's gunna take some moving around of your placements. The waves and colors are nice. Good job!

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:17 pm
by kendall_the_mann
Hi Arisa!

I really love your design! I love the wave, and your fonts are really playful and work well with your aesthetic! I think the only critique I could offer is maybe whitening the background boxes for the project text. They still fade into the white of the wave in the back a bit. Other than that, this is a great design! Awesome job!

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:58 pm
by rmepinero
Hello Arisa!
Your layout is so cool and organized! There’s a lot of detail in your wave and the color contrast with the orange is very aesthetically pleasing. The only thing I would do is move your body copy up a few clicks so that it’s all in the orange background and that there’s the same amount of margin above and below your text. Everything else is great!

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:29 pm
by IzzyB
Hi Arisa!

I love the use of Lemon Milk in this design (I can spot that anywhere ;) ). I also think you did a wonderful job on your wave as it does not look choppy or overly done. I think the rectangle around your name could be a little longer on both sides and that the type on the mobile version could be moved up a little bit. Great design overall though! :)

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:35 pm
by comicsansfanclub
Hi Arisa,

This one was my favorite and I'm glad you decided to go with this one. Everything is very easy to read and I love the organization. Your overall design gives a feeling of creativity and calmness. Great Job!

Re: Project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:46 pm
by dearangela
Hey Arisa,

Nice improvements!! The colors work really nicely and are a nice transition from orange to blue. One thing I can suggest is playing around with your name text, I think your name can be bigger! Great job.

Re: Project one final

Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2021 9:29 pm
by kmohara5190
Hi Arisa,
I am glad you picked this website for your final one, I really like the blue and orange together! It is a little difficult to read the text in a few areas, but overall I like it, good job!