GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

Hello Olivia,

It really does feel like a party with the shapes in the air, making it feel like confetti. Yes I agree with that you should add more shapes to the mobile and I think you shouldn align your text to the left.

Hi Olivia!

Still absolutely love the Thorn profile pic!

This design is so funky and fun! I love the 80's roller rink aesthetic and I love the pastel colors working with the darker ones! Its all very complimentary. The only suggestion I can offer is making your body copy 4x bigger! For your mobile it would even look incredible if you centered your text onto the fun 80's bubble design! Other than that this is such a fun design, awesome job!

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I like how you changed the size of the shapes as they shift from screen sizes, thats really clever!

Hiya Olivia,

I love how fun this layout is. I love the variety in shape, color, and texture and it’s not super distracting either. Everything looks great and organized. Nice work!

Hi Olivia.

I really like this combination of your two previous designs. It gives off an 80s roller skate rink vibe. Right now I have "Venus" by Shocking Blue stuck in my head while looking at your design. The only things that are throwing me off is your body copy and the picture of the doll but other than that I really like it!

Hi Olivia! Im digging the 80's style you got going on. The text on the bottom is a tad hard to read, but everything else is really well put together! well done!

Hey Olivia,

Love the little elements within your white background, it has some movement with playfulness, which makes me want to click around! I think your name could be a bit bigger, I am fighting which type to read first, great job!

Hi Olivia,

Very fun! It has a very retro vibe and I love it. The colors look nice too! The only thing I would change would be the alignment on your body type. I think you should try aligning the type towards the left. Very nice job!

Hi Olivia,
I love your design it is so fun and retro! There is a lot of empty space that I think would look good if something was there, but overall I like it, good work!