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Re: project01_final

Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2021 7:27 pm
by Krueckl
Hi Gavin,
I like the way you added some texture to the background. It is easy to find the information given and I also like the pink accent color with the exclamation mark.

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 6:58 pm
by kendall_the_mann
Hi Gavin!

This is such a sleek design! I really appreciate the aesthetic of your design, its professional, but still fun and personable! I only have one minor critique and its very subjective, but I would potentially consider having your photo right aligned instead of left. This way you'd be looking at your design and homepage instead of away from it. My eyes just slightly get drawn to where your photo is looking and in these, it's looking off the page! Other than that one off detail, this is a really cool design, awesome job!

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 7:47 pm
by rmepinero
Hello Gavin!
I totally take back everything I said on your preliminary. As I look at it again the green and pinks really stand out, they create a subtle contrast, and everything feel so cohesive. Great job!

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:13 pm
by Kelsey_Reynolds
Hi Gavin, your design is really clean looking, though I think more highlights of color will help bring some more visual interest to it

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:18 pm
by IzzyB
Hi Gavin,

Your design is very clean and all the colors work together. I really do like the pink color that you used and I like how you arranged everything. The top of the design seems a bit crowded though but that is a simple fix. :)

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:21 pm
by comicsansfanclub
Hi Gavin,

Your design layout looks very clean and professional. I like how you added that textured background. It definitely looked nice in white, but the black just made it even better. Nice job!

Re: project01_final

Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2021 11:53 pm
by dearangela
Hey Gavin,

I enjoy your layout, and pop of pink. Can't wait to click around

Re: project01_final

Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2021 9:42 pm
by kmohara5190
Hi Gavin,
I like the darker website, it has a very cool feeling, but it is not too dark because of the gradient. Great job!