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Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Posted: Tue May 04, 2021 5:58 pm
by comicsansfanclub
Hi Heather,
I love your first layout! especially the homepage! it looks so pretty and it has so much depth to it. I do like the green more than the blue because I think it's more representative of TMCC , but they both look great. Your design almost looks story book like and it's just so unique. Also, I agree with Kendall, the type on the Instructors page is a little hard to read and I'd also suggest playing around with more fonts.

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Posted: Tue May 04, 2021 9:57 pm
by ItsAllisxn
Hi Heather,

You have two very good compositions, but personally I'm leaning towards the first one. I really like the illustrated background you made. I also think the instructors page is super fun and creative and I love the art style you used when making it. Maybe adding some drop shadows or a mist effect between the mountain layers would help to give some depth, but regardless still looks great. I love the fun and playful font choice you picked as well. Everything looks easy and simple to navigate. Great work!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Posted: Wed May 05, 2021 8:51 pm
by Kelsey_Reynolds
Hi Heather, I love the hill design of your first design! I would definitely go for that one, it's really pretty and clean!

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Posted: Thu May 06, 2021 11:39 am
by gavin_clouser
What an interesting design. I think it's cool that you decided to do an illustration-based webpage. With a little refinement, I think it could add so much to the graphics website.