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Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:13 pm
by DustDjinn
Donna, its very simple, beautiful and easy to navigate. Good job

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 8:31 am
by mawpe
the only thing I can suggest for this terrific design is to make the button text more readable with contrast, the color values of the text is dark and hard to see over black. I like how you have turned your initials into a cool logo

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:25 pm
by Justin Hubert
Hi Donna, I like this one but I liked both of your designs so much in the first critique i think you could have gone either way. Have you thought about integrating your initials and the words photo and design more in the picture using that strong horizon line that's in the photo? I think you could do some cool stuff using the vanishing point tool in Photoshop. Looks good.

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:50 pm
by freem110
Its so bold! Great layout! I would like to see a bit more unity with color but its great!!

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 11:36 pm
by ekfulton
Hi Donna, well you know from my previous comments that I loved both designs from the preliminary round. My thoughts remain unchanged: I love the vanishing perspective in the photograph of your final design, although one of the strengths of the other design was the super photo which was actually of you. Nonetheless, I feel like you have a solid, pleasing, and contemporary final site design. Looking forward to seeing it live. EK

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 3:41 pm
by Landsknecht
Very nice, Donna!

I really like your choice of professional minimalist.

Re: Donna Harn, Project One, Final

Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:18 am
by campbell_mckeogh
nice layout and you should be able to pull this off no problem