Re: Project 2 Roughs
Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 10:29 am
Heya Dustin.
Like everyone else, I think the first one is too child-friendly. It looks like it's more a website for a Santa-in-the-mall-come-visit! kind of scenario, versus a pub crawl. A drunk Santa or elf might help, but I think it's just a little too childish for the point of the site. The elements are well-done though, and I think having the pole in the middle with different links pointing in all directions would be cool.
The second definitely has that more adult and inviting feel, and I love the texture/colors in your header. I'm not entirely sure what the gold thing is beside the Santa coaster, but if you put an image of a full beer glass in there, it would help tie it in with the pub idea. Your link circles are great but I think you need to incorporate the social media links better, instead of just having them in all of their spectacular colors there. As for the donation, maybe shorten your copy box and have a line under it about donating, with a link to a donate page? That way it could be on every page.
Personally, I like the second better.
Like everyone else, I think the first one is too child-friendly. It looks like it's more a website for a Santa-in-the-mall-come-visit! kind of scenario, versus a pub crawl. A drunk Santa or elf might help, but I think it's just a little too childish for the point of the site. The elements are well-done though, and I think having the pole in the middle with different links pointing in all directions would be cool.
The second definitely has that more adult and inviting feel, and I love the texture/colors in your header. I'm not entirely sure what the gold thing is beside the Santa coaster, but if you put an image of a full beer glass in there, it would help tie it in with the pub idea. Your link circles are great but I think you need to incorporate the social media links better, instead of just having them in all of their spectacular colors there. As for the donation, maybe shorten your copy box and have a line under it about donating, with a link to a donate page? That way it could be on every page.
Personally, I like the second better.