Re: Dylan Bivens Proj 2 Preliminary
Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:15 pm
Heya Dylan.
I like the background you chose for Chris' Guitars. It's interesting without being overwhelming. I would try to incorporate those vibrant colors in your header more into the rest of the site though, because they're a little distracting as they are. Also, it feels like you're just kind of jumping right into the meat of the site without offering any kind of introduction or 'welcome!' blurb, and I find myself thrown off a bit by that.
You've definitely cleaned up and organized the MSY site a lot better but I'm having that same problem where I'm not entirely sure what I'm looking at it. Maybe it's just me, but I always kind of want an introduction from sites like these.
Personally, I like the first better.
I like the background you chose for Chris' Guitars. It's interesting without being overwhelming. I would try to incorporate those vibrant colors in your header more into the rest of the site though, because they're a little distracting as they are. Also, it feels like you're just kind of jumping right into the meat of the site without offering any kind of introduction or 'welcome!' blurb, and I find myself thrown off a bit by that.
You've definitely cleaned up and organized the MSY site a lot better but I'm having that same problem where I'm not entirely sure what I'm looking at it. Maybe it's just me, but I always kind of want an introduction from sites like these.
Personally, I like the first better.