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Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:36 pm
by Alexey M
Im not sure about the second one, bt first design look cool and interesting. I think a couple more improvements and will look awesome.
Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:10 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
i like how you illustrated alot of your graphic elements
Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:55 pm
by Siri
I"m also liking the first set of roughs, not only does it incorporate a number of elements that we use every day for our program, but it catches the eye while also presenting a casual atmosphere, which is something that's important for our group and building relationships. And it looks similar to Ron's website as well.
There's a bit too much white space going on, but it shouldn't be hard to fix and clean up. You're off in a good direction!
Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:56 pm
by freem110
I love the idea of the first layout! but would love to see the computer feel more of the screen. Awesome!
Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 8:24 am
by Heyyou
Maria,
I think the first layout is a great visual concept. I would work with the size and scaling, and as Rebecca mentioned,the perspective of the objects on the desk. Good job.
Aharon
Re: Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED
Posted: Wed May 15, 2013 10:51 pm
by Landsknecht
Sorry, my feedback is going to be completely unhelpful.
I really like the computer screen as a container. Go with that one.
The second layout just doesn't grab me.