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Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:49 pm
by nunezm
Hi Nicole,
You have amazing roughs! I'm leading more towards your first set of layout it's more organized and its easier to navigate through. Great Job!!
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:09 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
LOVE the painted drip pies
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:48 pm
by Siri
I have to say that your second one is very exciting and catches the attention well! Though you might want to reconsider your text decorations, it's a bit hard to read and as Dan has beat into us all many times, typography is important.
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:59 pm
by freem110
The second layout is awesome! So unique and different, well done!
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:12 pm
by OliviasMama12
Hi Nicole!
Yes I definitely think I like the more colorful layout. But the circles might be throwing me off just a little- maybe they are "competing" too much with your colorful header graphic?
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 8:26 am
by Heyyou
Nicole,
The color splash concept works quite well. I would agree with Rebecca that giving your headline some equal weight by making it a bit more legible will help. Very nice.
Aharon
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary
Posted: Tue May 14, 2013 12:09 am
by Landsknecht
Totally torn between the excellent choices! I like the structure of the first layout, but not the colors. I really like the design of the artsy one, but I have no idea how you're gonna make it work. Great job, I like surprises!