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Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:24 pm
by Alexey M
Simple (in the cool way). Professional. Amazing. One of my favorite designs for project 3.

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:17 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
please do the second layout it is so awesome

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:45 pm
by OliviasMama12
I think I enjoy the second layouts more- the graphics are fun and more stylish!

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:00 pm
by freem110
I like both but I am leaning towards the second layout. tuff choice though because they both look great!

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:00 pm
by freem110
I like both but I am leaning towards the second layout. tuff choice though because they both look great!

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:35 pm
by Siri
Between the two I'm leaning more toward the second. While both are very similar (perhaps try playing with different colour palettes for more variety?), I think the second one is a better at catching attention and is more exciting.

Though I feel the need to point out that the colour scheme reminds me a lot of Renown Medical Center. :'D

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 10:10 pm
by Heyyou
Rebecca,

I also believe that the second layout is the stronger of the two. I do really like the illustration of the eye in the first layout. I hope you can find a way to incorporate it in one of your inside pages.

Aharon

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)

Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:38 pm
by Landsknecht
Great choice of colors Rebecca!! I really like your second layout, it has some great motion in it. Can't wait to see how it turns out!