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Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:56 pm
by DustDjinn
I enjoy layout one! It does remind me of save by the bell though.

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 8:52 am
by jennybreitrick
I really like how abstract your imagery and line work is on these! Fantastic job! So…did you use pink on this one? Hahaha- 8-)
jen

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 4:16 pm
by nunezm
Hi Aharon,
I really like your re-do it much more better and the colors are even better nice job :)

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:21 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
which one do you like?

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:21 pm
by freem110
I like the second layout best, well done!

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 7:30 pm
by Siri
I'm glad with the changes you've made to your first layout, as I liked that one the best, though now I worry if it might be a bit too dull after seeing the vibrancy of the colour scheme before. Maybe it's just my eyes trying to adjust to it, but otherwise I love your layout! It uses line and shape, and calls the attention easily with them without being too out there.

Re: Project 3 Preliminary Critique - Aharon Williams

Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:29 pm
by Landsknecht
definitely layout 1, and I like the updated color scheme (pink and blue just weren't strong enough college colors). excellent work.