project 3 critique!

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campbell_mckeogh
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Post by campbell_mckeogh »

the second layout appears to navigate better?

OliviasMama12
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Post by OliviasMama12 »

Hi Mel-

I think I like how the first set is coming together more- I think the colors and round elements are more visually engaging. Great job so far!!!
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freem110
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First layout is slick! dynamic, great use of color! Cant wait to see it live!
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Siri
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Post by Siri »

I have to say that I'm really liking both, and choosing a favourite is hard. The first one will have a lot of space at the top that would require scrolling, but hopefully not too much so. The second one might have a few too many lines that could be distracting to the eye in the background, but otherwise both of these are solid and your should go with the one you like best out of the two.
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Heyyou
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Post by Heyyou »

Jose,

The color scheme of the first set is very engaging and the shapes create great visual movement.

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Landsknecht
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Post by Landsknecht »

I like your first concept. I agree that the upper photo should change with the different pages. Good work.
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