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Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:13 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
the second layout appears to navigate better?
Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:16 pm
by OliviasMama12
Hi Mel-
I think I like how the first set is coming together more- I think the colors and round elements are more visually engaging. Great job so far!!!
Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:25 pm
by freem110
First layout is slick! dynamic, great use of color! Cant wait to see it live!
Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 7:35 pm
by Siri
I have to say that I'm really liking both, and choosing a favourite is hard. The first one will have a lot of space at the top that would require scrolling, but hopefully not too much so. The second one might have a few too many lines that could be distracting to the eye in the background, but otherwise both of these are solid and your should go with the one you like best out of the two.
Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 9:54 pm
by Heyyou
Jose,
The color scheme of the first set is very engaging and the shapes create great visual movement.
Aharon
Re: project 3 critique!
Posted: Mon May 13, 2013 11:32 pm
by Landsknecht
I like your first concept. I agree that the upper photo should change with the different pages. Good work.