Project 1 Prelim

[raton de biblioteca]

Hi Jackal,

The designs I like the most are the mobile yellow version and the black desktop version. I like these ones for the use of space, it leads my eyes because of the proximity and the use of lines that are separating each of the grouped elements. To improve upon either, you might consider using a different image for the desktop -black cat with black background looks strange to me and the yellow on yellow could be more overt because it is a cool logo for your name.

Best,

Rachel

[anayaestevan]

Hey Jackal,

I really like both of these layouts! They are both high quality! I'm leaning towards the first design a bit more. I like the flow of the information and the way it reads. But I like the color scheme of the other one better.

[Zera-Chann]

I like the second concept a lot layout is very nice, i would say is make the body copy just a couple point bigger.

Good luck!

[Tickosity]

I really like your white designs, they feel more lively and welcoming. However I completely lost your name because it doesn't contrast with the background well enough.