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Re: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:10 pm
by Zera-Chann
Hey Girl! love you ideas! it just feels a bit rushed and not really done.
best of luck!
Re: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:18 pm
by giusti56
Hi, I really like the bottom design and like the pattern with the trees. I think it works really well. I feel it is unfinished and I think more time with the layout and type will help it.
Re: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 8:31 pm
by Tickosity
I like the first two designs, they are fun and easy to read. However I would like to see something a bit brighter to highlight areas of importance, but that's probably just me.
Re: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 11:57 pm
by matt
I like the ticket layout the most. reminds me of going to the movie. you can do a lot with the concept. Interested to see where this goes : )