Project 1

[Zera-Chann]

I would say the train one is the strongest, just play with your typography more it just looks like a mess.

Best of luck!

[Tickosity]

I like the playfulness of your second designs, they are colorful and fun. However I think that is also part of the problem because I want to look at the art instead of the content.

[matt]

Hi Jamie,

I really like the pinball layout! I love how the text is laid out and I think the font types that you choose relly work well with the concept.