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Re: Project 1

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 5:19 pm
by Zera-Chann
I would say the train one is the strongest, just play with your typography more it just looks like a mess.

Best of luck!

Re: Project 1

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 8:27 pm
by Tickosity
I like the playfulness of your second designs, they are colorful and fun. However I think that is also part of the problem because I want to look at the art instead of the content.

Re: Project 1

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 11:49 pm
by matt
Hi Jamie,

I really like the pinball layout! I love how the text is laid out and I think the font types that you choose relly work well with the concept.