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Re: Preliminary Art Work

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 7:29 pm
by clawson
You have such great images they carry the whole design well. Some small suggestions are consider making the text boxes a little bigger than the text . In the mountain image your name could have a bigger contrast.

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 7:35 pm
by Tickosity
I really like that you were able to use the photos as your backgrounds and to keep the focus on them. My one critique is that a couple of the photos are a bit busy and it's kind of hard to see the navigation and other information.

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2018 5:42 pm
by tandyg
Hi Kaitlyn-

The color of the first web layout is neat. I like the perspective of the ocean and the dept created. The type is lost in the dark background. I wonder if a text box with the background could solve the problem of the hidden text of the content.