Re: Project 1 drafts (from Nicole Medrano)
Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:38 pm
Nicole,
I like the first one; I think that it is a much better layout and that the type doesn't get lost against the background like it does in the other design. If you are going to place photos in those frames i think the could be a little bigger, but I do like them staggered. I like the profile pic , but i do think you could add a little more space between that and the body paragraph. Also the body paragraph is a bit long. Maybe you could break those up a bit by using a gutter and a column system. Really nice work as usual!
I like the first one; I think that it is a much better layout and that the type doesn't get lost against the background like it does in the other design. If you are going to place photos in those frames i think the could be a little bigger, but I do like them staggered. I like the profile pic , but i do think you could add a little more space between that and the body paragraph. Also the body paragraph is a bit long. Maybe you could break those up a bit by using a gutter and a column system. Really nice work as usual!