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Project One Final

Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2017 11:53 pm
by Ltrueworthy
Hi everyone,
Here is my final layout for project one. I changed the font and made the astronaut guy the larger image instead of the TMCC logo. I think it looks nice and I am really happy with the colors.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2017 1:25 pm
by Ariesboxsye
Very spacey. Jokes aside, this is a very well done in my opinion, the space vibe is nice to see carried out through all elements of this layout, from the back ground to the font choice, even the imagery used. My only concern I can point out feels a bit nit picky but,two of the back ground buttons seemed to have a drop shadow placed on top of them, it could be image issues or not but I would go back and see if I can fix that.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:20 am
by Kyler_Rose
Your website it looking good, I like the Transparency you add to the back boxes. It makes it look a hole lot better compare to before. Other all I dont know what to tell you to improve one, maybe find a better spot for your contact information.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2017 9:52 pm
by susielang
Very whimsical. Cool background. Like your theme and it has a 3d look to it. Great illustration. Easy to navigate.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2017 8:11 am
by erika.murray
I think the transparency of the purple box behind your about section is a nice touch. Everything is overall working really well. The only thing I might change is to align the text above and below the astronaut to the top and bottom of the purple about rectangle. Also, maybe try making your headline left aligned?

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2017 5:31 pm
by Zera-Chann
Hey Lea,

Love the colors and the Layout, I would say make your contact info bigger its really hard to read.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2017 9:44 pm
by selvster5000
I agree I like your colors and your font choice. The bigger astronaut is nice too.
I think you definitely killed the space theme, great work. I may try to relocate
the the spaceship, its drawn quite well, although it seems out of place.

Overall, nice work!

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2017 3:23 pm
by darian_p
It feels like one of those space exploration video games. The colors are nice and the layout makes it easy to read everything. good work.

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2017 4:31 pm
by ktwy
This is adorable! Love the background, and the little astronaut. Great job :)

Re: Project One Final

Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2017 4:48 pm
by Instructor
What, no poll? :(

I'm still amused by astronaut dude. He seems so confusedly resigned. I'm glad you made him bigger. We all needed more of him. I also like your headline font. The Jetsons-style floating rings amuse me. Everything in your composition is so nicely placed. The astronaut balances your body copy. The brightening background image at the bottom balances the top bar. Your navigation is easy to see and use. You also use margin pretty darn effectively through the whole layout.

I think you needed one more fun space object in the left of your top bar to balance out the space shuttle. I'm also not sure your buttons needed drop shadows. I'm also not 100% sold on the purple boxes, though the semi-transparency really helps.

Great effort!