Project 01 roughs

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hiitsyuri24
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Project 01 roughs

Post by hiitsyuri24 »

Hello everyone!

Here are the websites that inspired me.
http://melanie-f.com/en/
http://www.mikiyakobayashi.com/projects/

Also, here are the websites that I thought useful.
https://www.impactbnd.com/blog/tips-for ... web-design
https://webdesign.tutsplus.com/tutorial ... -cms-26945

I do not know if this site is useful or not, but I thought it is interesting to share with you all.
https://www.webdesignmuseum.org
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Yuri Aoki

agostina_renau
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Post by agostina_renau »

Hi Yuri, I love the color scheme of your designs. They are easy to navigate and I like the white space. However, I could not figure out which designs go together for mobile and computer. Maybe use the same image for them.
Agostina From Argentina

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evexhouses
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Post by evexhouses »

Hey Yuri!
I love the simplicity on your designs and they also have a good use of light colors. That photo of you is amazing!!
My favorite has to be the one with the beach background. Its got a really nice and peaceful feeling to it, I would recommend putting a bit more emphasis on your text and your photo because it is kinda small.
GREAT JOB!! :D
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kayla.pressburger
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Post by kayla.pressburger »

I like your second design the best! I like how it kinda has a retro vibe to it, and the picture in the background is really cool. Your other designs are nice as well, however you may want to consider playing around with more typefaces to make them stronger designs.
Kayla Pressburger

tweetysmurf2350
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Post by tweetysmurf2350 »

I think your second design with the pictures in the background is the best. I like the images you chose and the colors you chose make me feel very calm, but that maybe because teal is my favorite color.

Hope this helps.
Terri
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jason_hosier
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Post by jason_hosier »

Hey Yuri, Your fourth design is my favorite. I think the sea shell really puts the theme together and you should think of integrating it into the mobile design as well. The only criticism I could offer is that there might be a bit to much center alignment in your design. The eye just slides off. Remember we were talking about how a persons eye moves in a z pattern? I really like your color choices, very calming and relaxing use of teal. Looks good.
"Any law that cannot bend in a storm is destined to be broken."

Drakula
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Post by Drakula »

Hi Yuri,

I like your concept, and the layouts with a photo in the background. The third one is my fav, who wouldn't want to be at the beach! Your work is very straight forward and simple to navigate. Good job!
Dana Drakulich-King

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Post by veronica chapman »

my favorite is the one with the Eiffel tower in the picture. though the colors are calm and subdued the picture is powerful and the font that you used is a little bolder than your other designs. I like that.

kj923
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Post by kj923 »

Hi Yuri, I like the colors you chose to incorporate into your designs. I would suggest trying out other fonts though! Play around with mixing 2-3 fonts into your favorite design :)

Good luck, can’t wait to see the final draft.
-Kaitlyn Johnson

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Post by emilyduke »

Hey Yuri!

I like the design with the Eiffel tower image, I think its bold and the typeface you chose for your name is really cool. I also like how the black font looks on the blue sky. I would suggest creating a desktop version that follows these themes.
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