project 1 rough #2

[veronica chapman]

here is my second set of roughs for project 1 I posted them separately I hope that's not too confusing.

[agostina_renau]

I though I commented in your post already, no? It was yellow and purple. If so, this one feels much more easy to read.

[Drakula]

Hi Veronica,

I posted on your last one, I prefer this one. The color scheme draws more attention to the content, and gives it a glorious vibe lol. good job!

[tandyg]

This is so cool Ronnie. I like these too. Your colors are fun. I have to clean up my mess of a rough before I get close to your layouts.

Was going to post a meme here and got lost in the internet.

[Jaime Ramey]

Hi, I really like the colors and how they blend into each other. Nice Job.
Jaime

[kj923]

Comparing to your first design, I like the contrast in this design better.

Your text is still a little hard to read with such a busy background. Maybe try making the areas behind your text less transparent.

[evexhouses]

Hey Ronnie!
I love this one!! The colors are much easier to look at and it all is super balanced out! You can never go wrong with using purple and white! You should try turning down the opacity on the background texture/pattern so it makes everything easier to read!

[emilyduke]

Hi again!

I like this design a lot more than the other, I think the layout is really creative and gives me the sense of looking up at trees and the sun rays coming through.

[Jones]

I still like the font you chose. The original two you posted are still my fav. These are a fun layout. Nice and balanced.

[Stasiavous]

Great colors and I love how you've showcased your work! I would say you could make them a little bit larger if you wanted. The typeface you've chosen works well too. Very nice!