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My roughs

Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 11:03 pm
by themeg98
Hello, these are my two different layouts. My first concept was based on https://i.pinimg.com/736x/ad/cf/88/adcf ... ration.jpg
I liked this layout mainly because the background was creating a mountain range with different values of one hue.
My second layout was based on https://www.westcoastcustoms.com
I liked this site because the graphics the used were a mixture of both drawn images and pictures.
I was mainly going for a simple and clean look for my second layout while keeping color to basically nonexistent.
The second was meant to be more graphic rather than picture based.

Re: My roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:55 am
by agostina_renau
I like these two! In one of the designs, the mountains look vectorized but the clouds real, very cool! I was going to say that you should make the bio paragraph shorter in one of the designs, but then I realized it’s a mobile design.

Re: My roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:12 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I like the purple one better. I think that the text for your name needs to be a little bit lighter in color to make it easier to read. Just a thought.

Hope this helps,
Terri

Re: My roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 8:20 pm
by Drakula
Hello Megan,

You designs are very cool, I really like elements of both. The concept of the mountains is very fresh and smart, the front cloud on the mobile layout it looks very bright. The flow of the road design is beautiful, the way you name is bordered is very pleasing to the eye. Great job.

Re: My roughs

Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 11:51 pm
by veronica chapman
really nice work. It's really well done. I think you might want to add just a little more of your own personality. I'll bet it's fabulous!

Re: My roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 8:42 pm
by evexhouses
I love that you tried making a vector and a photographic design. I do think you should make your body copy on both designs a bit bigger and make the colors lighter so that their easier to read.
Other than that, Awesome Job!

Re: My roughs

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:46 pm
by kj923
Hey Megan I really like the visuals you used in both your layouts! I would suggest making you font a little bigger in you paragraph and maybe play with your web design layouts some more. I really like your mobile ones though!

Lookin good!!

Re: My roughs

Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2018 1:21 pm
by emilyduke
Hey Megan,

I think both of your designs are great! I like the image just because its eye catching yet simple, so the type is very prominent. I would suggest either aligning the image to a side, like on your mobile version, or filling the entire space on the desktop design. Hope this helps!

Re: My roughs

Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 1:13 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi Megan,
I really like both designs. The images are really good.. I love them. I also like the little bit of color you use in the 2nd design.
Jaime :D

Re: My roughs

Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 1:18 pm
by Jones
Hello!

I find the road options to be more intriguing, though the mountains are beautiful and have a peaceful feel to them. The road pulls me in more, and I feel more interested in what is being offered by those designs. The body text is a bit crowded under the road, perhaps play with spacing a bit on that?

They look great!