Page 1 of 2

project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 3:56 pm
by agostina_renau
I made the decision to go with the sunflower design, the other had a lot of potential but I didn't have the time to make it look cooler. I don't know what's supposed to go in this comment but I have 3 minutes to submit before I'm late so..

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 9:30 pm
by kayla.pressburger
I love your layouts! The sunflower adds a really nice pop of color, and the typeface you used for your name is perfect! Great job!

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 7:23 am
by Drakula
Hi Agostina,

I love the boho vibe of your layout! its very simple and effective, it makes me want explore the whole site. Great job!

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 2:03 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! These are nice, I like the simplicity of them, the sunflower really pops.

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 3:44 pm
by matt
Hi Agostina from Argentina

I like the simplicity of your design. I also like how you used hierarchy to define your site layout. maybe adding some paper overlay texture to the white space would help give this more of a polished look. Great work!

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 7:52 pm
by jason_hosier
Wow Agostina, the sunflower really pops! Maybe you could put a line under your title though. it might separate the page a little better and make your Title stand out more, just a thought. I look forward to seeing your ideas develop.

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 1:23 pm
by Jackal
Hi Agostina!

I love your website a lot! The one sunflower really makes it visually interesting because of how bright it is compared to the rest of your composition. Your type choices are also really nice, good job!

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 1:34 pm
by Jones
I like the way you layered things, and the color choices you made to help bring a focus to the yellow sun flower. The page has a great 3d feel. Could you make the flower a little bigger?

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:28 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I really love this! It looks very streamline. The only thing I would change is there is a contrast issue with your name and the grayscale background, but other than that it looks great!

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:53 pm
by anayaestevan
Really good stuff here!

I like the aesthetic. Very 1910's WW1 feel. Maybe that's just me.

I think you could push the letter theme further. Maybe use a typewriter font? Play around with the flower to make it look older or lower quality to really push the vintage thing?

Excited to see where this goes.