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Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 10:59 pm
by kj923
I took the ideas from my preliminary work and applied different parts to my final design. I like working with black and white in website designs so it doesn't distract from my actual work.

Hope you enjoy! :)

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2018 11:37 pm
by kj923
mobile design

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 2:16 pm
by emilyduke
Hey! These are awesome! I really like the simplicity of the black and white, I think you could even get rid of the big succulent on the left and you would have a really clean and simple design with a pop of color from the blue succulent, either way looks nice!

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 3:12 pm
by matt
nice. did you take those pix?
I like the concept.

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2018 8:02 pm
by jason_hosier
I really like your choice of font and your images are top notch. on the right side where the flower intersects with the image it looks a little strange. Maybe use a transparency or something? idk but it looks like an area to work on. My first impression was that your composition is rather stunning. Good work.

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:52 am
by Drakula
Hi Kaitlyn,

Your layouts are beautiful, the little added pops of color really give it a nice mood. I really enjoy your minimalistic touch. Great job!

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:04 pm
by anayaestevan
Great work! Much better than the previous one.

I like the overall layout and colors. I like the psuedo 3-d thing going on too.

The font is fine for your body copy but I'm not sure it helps much with anything else. I would play around with that a bit more. Maybe you could add some perspective on those images to make them face the same directions as the flowers? Just an idea.

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 10:53 am
by Jones
Neat-o! I like the images, color scheme and use of white space to balance out the body text. It's eye catching and makes one ask what is going on here... but in a good way. Nice.

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 3:37 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I really like the knocked out images on your websites. They really pop ofd of that white background.

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2018 8:59 pm
by Jackal
Hi Kaitlyn!

I really love this design and your choice of the succulents! Also your photos are super nice! I would maybe mess around with the positioning of them in your mobile version just so there isn't that giant patch of white space in the area on the right. Nice job!!