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Final Project 2

Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2018 6:54 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi everyone,

This is my website http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2018/yuri-aoki/. I kept my website simple!

Also, this is my redesign of my bad website http://www.grc175.com/student/fall_2018 ... index.html. I hope this is better than the original one https://web.archive.org/web/20180116122 ... haus.info/

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2018 7:23 pm
by Drakula
Hey Yuri!

Nice job! The menu made me really want beer and sausage! I love the texture of the brick wall in the background it gives that feeling of a cool hangout spot in combination with your elegant table setting really put the atmosphere of the restaurant on the site. Your home page worked out well too, the headline/logo is amazing! (Thanks for playing with my daughter, she loves you lol)

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2018 6:56 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The colors translated really well onto both website! The name headline on your portfolio is so eye-catching with the transparencies. I also like the cursive font choice on the restaurant website inner pages.

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2018 1:58 pm
by Instructor
Looking minty fresh there, Yuri. Your Project Two is just ... mmmmmmm beer gradient. Sorry what? I was distracted there for a minute. Wait, did you use a hub and spoke site layout for your Project Two? That's brave. Not sure if I agree with it, but it is brave nonetheless. Good use of injected fonts on both of your projects. I especially like the ghost kanji over your name on your Project One. Great use of live type and z-index there. Your navigation is very strong on both of your projects too. Easy to find and use. And I especially like the little bit of transparency on the rollovers on your Project Two. Good use of illustrative images on Project Two. They really tell me what the place looks and feels like and make me hungry for their food. And that beer gradient is just marvelous. Yum!

I think the dividers between your buttons on your Project One are a little harsh. I think they'd look more "realistic" if you made the shadow color a dark mint and the highlight color a light mint. Also, make the page that links to your projects look similar to your home page. You need a home page button on your Project Two inner pages so that users can get back to the central page in your hub and spoke site layout.

Good work!

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2018 9:49 pm
by kj923
I like the teal color you used in your project 1 website! Your project 2website is very awesome!! Pretty easy to navigate and I like the font choice

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 5:29 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
These look very organized and professional looking.

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 6:06 pm
by Jones
I really like the way both your sites turned out. The Bavarian one makes me hungry. Fantastic images and I like the way you used the brick wall as a background. I like the way your header turned out on your profile as well. Nice work!

Re: Final Project 2

Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2018 7:10 pm
by agostina_renau
i think you did a great job for project 2! i like a lot the overlapping header for project 1