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Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:54 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi everyone,

I kept everything simple! I used TMCC GREEN first and got bored, so I used few different colors for other one.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 1:18 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I like the clean and professional look of the first one, it looks like it belongs at a University, let alone a Community College. The second one has merit, but the bright neon colors you used kind of makes my eyes vibrate, so over all go with the first one.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 4:29 pm
by Drakula
I'm torn between the two. I like the first one for the sake of simplify and the overall TMCC aesthetic, but I feel the second one is so interesting and fun.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 8:15 pm
by jason_hosier
ugh, to be honest I think the color overlay in your first set doesn't look right. I like your second layout especially the strong images you've chosen but the colors just don't appear professional or look like a college website. it looks like you are promoting a preschool. my second set of designs is kind of like this too. lol.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:53 pm
by emilyduke
I love color, but I think the first one looks more like a website to me. You could try getting rid of the black stroke on your big transparent box-it might make it look a little cleaner, and this is kind of like my Project 2 page design! The transparent box over a big image is nice!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 10:13 pm
by veronica chapman
I like your first design with the mountains in the back, my only suggestion is the white box overlay could maybe be scaled to better fit the contents. it seems that there is too much empty.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 4:52 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The first design is so Reno in the fall! The green color that you have is spot on!!!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 8:38 pm
by evexhouses
I think the first set are my favorite, I would suggest playing around with your fonts a bit and adding more content to your pages. A picture is worth a 1000 words!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2018 1:23 pm
by clawson
I like both designs and either could work. In the photo I'd try lessening how much green there is. On the second design I might try using "jewel-tone" colors as a way of unifying the design. Both are easy to read and visually interesting

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2018 12:31 pm
by matt
Hi Yuri,

out of the two layouts that you've put up I definitely prefer the second over the first. It seems like you can create visual interest around the simple minimal style.

I can't wait to see these put into a website. nice work

I like the font choice too. It complements the overall concept of your design.