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Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 10:39 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hello everyone! I wanted to create a duotone concept with my websites and keep things minimal. Enjoy!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 1:23 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I like the first ones better. I like the use of the baby puke green and the over all feel of those ones. The orange ones kind of hurt my eyes a bit. Especially the inner pages.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 8:57 pm
by jason_hosier
The first version is better. the green isn't so bad but the layout needs a little encouragement to lead the eye better.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:30 pm
by emilyduke
I already let you know the green version is great! I like the minimalism with the bold image- I imagine a smaller more subtle nav that goes horizontal across the top right of the screen when I think of a minimal design and think that might balance your large type maybe?? In some ways the different bodies of type look slightly random.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 10:00 pm
by veronica chapman
I love your duotone! I like the green and the purple but the green is probably more TMCC! your images are really nice also.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 12:29 pm
by Drakula
I love how colorful the second designs are, but I think the first ones work better for the project.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 2:18 pm
by kayla.pressburger
I like your first set of designs! They’re clean and simple and get straight to the point. You may consider putting a color behind your bodycopy to make it easier to read, or lowering the opacity of your background image. Nice work!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 4:17 pm
by raton de biblioteca
I like the green design.....Watch out for the color blind colors!

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 9:02 pm
by evexhouses
As you already know, the first ones are my favorite! They are super cool, you just need to make that text stand out a bit more.

Re: Project 3 Roughs

Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2018 12:12 pm
by clawson
tough choice, both really original looks. I think I like the orange one best. The only minor thing I see is the smaller text is tough to read on some.