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project 3 prelim

Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 11:24 pm
by clawson
Here are my roughs, let me know how I can improve these, thanks

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 1:24 pm
by tweetysmurf2350
I think I like the second designs better because they seem more finished and clean cut than the other ones.

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 8:46 pm
by jason_hosier
what happened to your TMCC Logo? it looks like a Christmas tree.

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:32 pm
by emilyduke
I prefer the design with the tmcc image! I think its more approachable and people like pictures haha, but maybe you can take or find a clearer image of tmcc, the overall graininess of these designs feels kind of 90's to me.

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 11:33 am
by Drakula
The design TMCC image is cool, it works really well with the project. It's very easy to navigate too!

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 4:30 pm
by raton de biblioteca
I like the second design it has a more distinctive color scheme. I would choose a san-serif for the body-copy because of the amount of words in the text. Sorry, the logo looks like GATM to me in the hierarchy.

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2018 8:52 pm
by evexhouses
I really like the second designs more, the background on the first one just seems a bit too busy to me.

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2018 4:56 pm
by Stasiavous
I like your second design the best. The jewel tone colors are nice and the layout is easily navigated. The background of the other one is a little busy. Your TMCC logo looks distorted. :shock:

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2018 11:45 pm
by matt
I think that the second layout that you put together is stronger than the repeating image background one. I like the color scheme that you choose and i really like how you used the main center image to balance the layout. nice work!

Re: project 3 prelim

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2018 12:09 pm
by Jones
The computer picture designs are mah favs. They are easier for me to read and take in the infos. I like the color choices, the logo is fun too. The image is great and expansive. Good work.