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project one final

Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 2:05 am
by darth vader de pot noodle
hello y'all its me Juan, sorry i'm late...I have adjusted the background transparency in an attempt to make it easier to see all text and logos. if i missed something please do tell.
AND YES I AM DOING THE TEXT COLOR ON PURPOSE.
ill and the links in a bit

Re: project one final

Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 3:20 pm
by KJX
Hey

I like the switch board as the background and you used a good color scheme.
Keep up the good work.

-KJ

Re: project one final

Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2020 8:04 pm
by meekster_
the logo stands out much better now ! really good layout and color choice !!

Re: project one final

Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2020 8:12 pm
by missStormy
The circuit theme is working well and I like what you did with your initials. I think the background for some reason looks muted though, maybe use a darker overlay? Good job overall.

Stormy

Re: project one final

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:09 pm
by hmayooo
This looks awesome, I really like the changes and that you can see the logo more clearly. I think the only thing I would change is the placement of the TMCC logo, right now it looks a little out of place since half of it is inside that darkened footer area, and half of it is outside. Other than that great work!

Re: project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 5:17 pm
by JamesC46
You can try giving the logo a 0px distance, ~10px size drop shadow so it stands out more from the background and a more opaque body text box to make it more readable. The navigation is well made and legible. Thanks for sharing.

Re: project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 6:26 pm
by SkellyboneJones
The vibrance is really helping the logo stand out, and the same is true of the navigation bar. The background is a little too washed out though, personally. If you could somehow darken or deepen it slightly without it obfuscating the logo's readability I think it'd be perfect. Either way, excellent work!

Re: project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 7:57 pm
by suiish
What's up, Juan. I like how you made your logo stand out, but it's a shame that the background has to be washed out for you to see it! I really like the electric blue and black you used for your website. The only thing is that I think your body text is still a tad bit hard to read. I don't know maybe it's because it's just lorem ipsum type, so maybe when you do add information it will be easier.

Re: project one final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 8:37 pm
by sndbox
I really really like the changes you've made!! It turned out really nice!!
Having the design in your logo blend in with the background was a really cool feature!
I think maybe just darkening that box behind the paragraph would make the paragraph a tiny bit easier to read, but other than that it turned out really good! :D

Re: project one final

Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 7:18 pm
by Gr8K8
I like how this evolved! I think your logo/intials look really cool and I also like the changes you made with your fonts. I also like the decision to change your nav button text to black, it's a little easier on the eyes. Maybe try and work with your name/email to be the same length as the top of your logo/initials.