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project 1 final

Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 12:04 pm
by meekster_
I chose the darker theme for my final, it was just more appealing to me, changed it up a bit by making the text boxes and such! thank you for all the feedback it was helpful!

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 3:17 pm
by KJX
Hey,

Awesome changes! Love the background photo and the color schemes.

-KJ

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2020 8:15 pm
by missStormy
The changes have defiantly improve it and your designs have a clean look to them. I don't think you need that side bar though on the right. If you want to keep it I would put it on the left. Good job.

Stormy

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 7:06 pm
by hmayooo
I really love this design, it has an appealing dark theme without being too heavy. I agree that the sidebar on the mobile version looks a little awkward, maybe if you placed the links in the sidebar it may look a little more like it’s supposed to be there. Good job!

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 5:14 pm
by JamesC46
I think making the image full-width instead of having the sidebar on the right would really improve your design. Everything else looks nice.

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 6:24 pm
by SkellyboneJones
I absolutely love the off-grey you used for the background. It combines with that mellow orange just excellently, and I really like it. Excellent work on the design!

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 7:05 pm
by darth vader de pot noodle
Nach allen bekannten Luftfahrtgesetzen sollte eine Biene auf keinen Fall fliegen können. Seine Flügel sind zu klein, um seinen fetten kleinen Körper vom Boden abzuheben. Die Biene fliegt natürlich trotzdem, weil es den Bienen egal ist, was Menschen für unmöglich halten.
yeetous skeetous, fetus deletous.
herro
i like the focal point on the flower and the use of low opacity shape for the info box.

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 8:04 pm
by suiish
Hey Mika, I love how simplistic your design is. The orangey color really pops with the black background and it looks very modern.

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 8:41 pm
by sndbox
I really like how it turned out!!
I think that orange really adds to the design and helps lead your eye to the flower in the middle.
I also really like the simplicity of the design, it really helps not distract from the background!
Overall it turned out really nice!! :D

Re: project 1 final

Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 7:25 pm
by Gr8K8
These turned out lovely! I like the decision to switch from a blue to an orange text box. These feel super clean and well balanced layouts. I really like your fonts choices and your navigation buttons. I realllly like the unusual shape you gave the orange text box of your computer version. I think it would look cool if you implemented that into your mobile version as well.