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project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:03 pm
by thusers
here it is as a sketch.

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:25 pm
by thusers
bad ass, man. looks like graffiti.

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:51 pm
by jenny_snaza
Love the text! Great job, and can't wait to see it finished!

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:09 pm
by sktlz1965
Nice, I think if you use maybe a dark background, maybe include metallic, and metal finishes to it might be kinda cool...I think this will be a really cool design once fully complete! good job

Faith

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:35 pm
by Alaxvong
This is a cool design. I would consider a larger content area. Maybe you can shrink down the navigation a bit too.

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:46 pm
by TommieGuy
This is going to be nice. I think the design is strong. Yes, think about making the links smaller.

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:44 pm
by artgalstyle
I like the big type and it would be cool as metal or something fun. You can always put more content on your other pages. I also think the buttons could be smaller or somehow fit them into the title so it looks like one way cool design. Bet your background would look cool with a soft texture but not so much and to compete with the Big Text. Love it!

Laramie

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 2:07 pm
by deni
I like this design. I like the graffiti look a lot. Great job!

Denise

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 3:10 pm
by R3YNO
Its one thing to make a graphiti headline, Its another thing to make legible. You sir have done that and it looks cool. Any thoughts on colors?

Re: project 3 (the real one)

Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:17 pm
by cheyanne
I agree with the others. Metallic textures and smaller navigation would make it modern and design-y. I really like the graffiti idea.