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project#1 index page redux

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:11 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
ok I messed around with some images and stuff,

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:49 pm
by jennybreitrick
very cool-

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:25 am
by re8ecca
I really like this Campbell. The only thing I would suggest is to mask out some of the texture on the menu options and project links. I want to see them stand off the background just a tad more. I think your placement of the illustration in the background is perfect. Those glasses are like your personal icon. Very cool.

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 6:00 pm
by rmosley
I agree with Re8ecca on making the type stand out more by masking the texture in the background. But good job, I love the colors and the play-on CMYK with CMCK. Looks awesome!

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 6:26 pm
by Heyyou
Campbell,

I agree with Rachel and Rebecca on the texture. Your use of color helps your nav menu stand out from your background, but the texture really pushes it back. The layout looks great and the color scheme is working well together.

Aharon

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:02 pm
by campbell_mckeogh
no worries will tone it down a bit

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 8:54 am
by donnalouwho
Hey Campbell,
Nice redux! I really prefer this to your other. I do like the texture but would have to agree that it's a bit hard to read your text. Other than that, nice job!

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 7:58 pm
by nunezm
Hi Campbell,
The background image is great I like it. One thing I suggest doing is maybe change the text for the about me I personally are having a hard time reading it. Excellent job on the layout. :)

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:16 am
by I'mNicole
Heya Campbell.

Awesome revisions! The background image is interesting without being overwhelming and the play on color is great. Like everyone else, I do find the texture a little overwhelming in places, and I would definitely increase the size of your "Who I am?" section to make it more readable. But that makes me curious too, because you have a link that says "Who am I?" so is it going to be an anchor link and just take you to that little section on your homepage?

Re: project#1 index page redux

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 2:19 pm
by OliviasMama12
Very nice job. Love the color scheme.