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Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 12:58 pm
by Alexey M
Hi, guys.
This is the awful website that I`ve chose.
http://www.pennyjuice.com/htmlversion/home.htm
Ant these is my two different versions of roughs for home and content page.
I was trying to stick with the design for kids and that rainbow theme.
Which one do u like better?
Thanks.
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:48 am
by re8ecca
Hi Alexey - I am completely drawn to your second set of roughs. I love the masthead, with the rainbow giving it some dynamic action, and I love the illustration of the kid in the juice stand. It sure kicks the ass of the original concept on their current site. At this point I can't even think of a way to improve it. I think it's really solid. Nice work.
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 9:36 am
by gokudera08
looks awesome so fun and colorful.
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 9:52 am
by jennybreitrick
Wow Alexey! I am in love with the layout of both pages! The colors and imagery that you chose are working wonderful together. You really set the mood for the audience.
jen
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:49 am
by mel_nunez
hey Alexey!! good job with both of your layouts i like both. the use of the colors and the cartoon imagery attracts the attention from you target audience. Keep working hard...
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2013 10:14 am
by Heyyou
Alexey,
Both of your layouts work very well. I am drawn to the imagery of the second layout because I love the idea of the "lemonade stand". My only suggestion is to make sure to put your copy into columns. Line lengths of copy that long tend to mess with the natural pace of reading. Very good work.
Aharon
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:07 pm
by nunezm
Hi Alexey,
The redesign of the original site is Great!. Its interesting to look at and the information easy to find. I like color scheme. The images used are great specially the (lemon stand) Awesome layout
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Fri Mar 29, 2013 6:52 am
by OliviasMama12
Hi Alexey!
Well I think I enjoy the second layouts more, just because the kids lemonade stand is a great idea! It would be cool if there was some way you could integrate the navigation onto the lemonade stand sign!
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 6:49 am
by donnalouwho
Love your designs, Alexey! They both look awesome but I love the second design best. It feels very complete and ready to go!
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 6:55 pm
by DustDjinn
Alexey you do a great job every single time. I enjoy both but I feel you have a stronger case for the second layout. It works perfectly and you should be proud.