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Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Fri May 03, 2013 5:22 pm
by Alexey M
These are my two version for grc web page.

On the first one I decided to add more colors and make the pages look bright and kinda happy.
For the second design, I decided to stick with solid design, using just black white and TMCC green color.
Hope you ll like it guys.

Thanks for your feedbacks.

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 7:43 pm
by OliviasMama12
Hi Alexey-

Well i think I like the color scheme of the first drafts more, but the Typography of the second layouts. Is there anyway you could combine both elements???

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 10:47 pm
by Juan Vazquez Lopez
Hello Alexis,
I like the second layout, I think the green and the black background make a good contrast besides that I like how you played with the shapes into the layout...also I like your pictures ...good job.

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:12 am
by donnalouwho
hi alexey! nice job on both, it is hard to decide! i like elements in both but i think i like the second overall. i like the blocking and the large images you used. good job!

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 3:18 pm
by Justin Hubert
I like the second designs color and layouts much better than the tops one.

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:55 pm
by DustDjinn
Second one!! I voted too

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 8:54 am
by jennybreitrick
Dude, your vote thing is off the way awesome! Good work on both of these layouts!
jen

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 10:11 am
by I'mNicole
Heya Alexey.

I love the line of colorful letters on your first layout, and that pink peeling sticker for your links! Amazing! I do think the header could use some work to make it more interesting. Your second layout is very clean and neat, and I think the shapes for your images and content, but the background on that one makes me want to look away.

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 12:58 pm
by nunezm
Hi Alexey,

Nice roughs!! I agree with the first layout feel more happy especially with color being used. Also its clean and it flows nicely. The second layout is also clean and organized. I'm undecided whatever one you will look amazing. I personally voted for the second one. Nice Job!!

Re: Project 3 first Critique Alexey Makovskiy

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 5:10 pm
by Siri
Alexey,

I'm definitely liking the second layout. While the first layout is good and rather colourful, the second layout is very clean. It could use a little spicing up, but otherwise you're taking it in a good direction with clear hierarchy.