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by Olive
Tue Apr 27, 2021 8:29 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim project 04
Replies: 13
Views: 2173

prelim project 04

Okay, so I'm not exactly happy with the type of the second website! But then again I'm not a fan of the color green either I really wish I went with a black color palette or at least muted the green. I'm planning to use a more pleasing green as the one I've used for my mobile design is too bright an...
by Olive
Thu Mar 25, 2021 12:59 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Prelim Project 03 (ノω・、)
Replies: 16
Views: 2700

Prelim Project 03 (ノω・、)

No joke the website I chose to redesign https://www.rollerkingdom.org/ suddenly had an overnight transformation :!: so now my redesigns don't even matter (ಥ﹏ಥ)... I don't even have any screenshots of the old website to compare it to. I'm not sure what to do now since everything I was working with is...
by Olive
Fri Feb 26, 2021 4:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 final
Replies: 18
Views: 2695

Project 01 final

Hello Everybody! Here are my final layouts for project one, I bet it's not what anyone expected╮( ̄ω ̄;)╭ Long story short instead of choosing one design and perfecting it I combined my favorite parts of my two first layouts to create my vision. I knew wanted a colorful retro/Memphis design with minim...
by Olive
Mon Feb 15, 2021 6:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique!
Replies: 17
Views: 2774

Re: Preliminary Critique!

Hi Lindsey :)

Your designs are amazing! I really love the use of the designs and color palettes especially the red black and white one but the type needs to be a bit bolder it gets lost with the black because it's too thin.
by Olive
Mon Feb 15, 2021 6:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Critique Project 1
Replies: 16
Views: 2445

Re: Preliminary Critique Project 1

Hi Kassandra :) The designs you have are really nice the first one gives a really playful feel with the diamond shapes layout but I think the color palette could use some work, I favor your second design more because of the colors and clear layout but it could use more expressive type instead of a r...
by Olive
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:34 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Replies: 13
Views: 1837

Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique

Hi Jacklyn :) Both your designs are great and they both have a different layout which I think shows two different sides. Your second rough is the one I like the most because it has a more professional feel but I think experimenting with different colors is something you could try to make it stand out.
by Olive
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:26 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary 01
Replies: 17
Views: 2471

Re: Preliminary 01

Hi Hannah :D

your designs are super cute! I love the colors you chose for each they are very pleasant and work well. I like the first one but I feel it could use another color or tint and a second type style for the headline
by Olive
Sat Feb 13, 2021 2:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Preliminary Critique! Take a Look!
Replies: 17
Views: 2586

Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique! Take a Look!

Hi Meghna :)

I like your design roughs, the layouts are clean and colorful. I favor the last one because of the specific layout and colors chosen but the white square seems out of place I would suggest bringing it to the center and lowering the opacity of the white just a little.
by Olive
Thu Feb 11, 2021 9:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 2403

Re: Project 1 Preliminary roughs

Hi Estrella :D Your designs are super good ! I like the pink layout rather than the neon one, mostly because the colors you u=used for the neon either fade into the background to where I can't see them or the colors are too bright where they're hard to look at. The pastel pink and white color combin...
by Olive
Thu Feb 11, 2021 9:39 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
Replies: 17
Views: 2344

Re: Project 01 Preliminary

Hi Hazzie :D Your designs are very clean and sleek in design they are very professional looking with the layout as well. I do like your second design mostly for the color and butterfly background you've incorporated it makes it seem more friendly and open. Not that your first design isn't amazing as...