GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

The logo tied into the motif of the tree photo is rad, I really like that. I really like how the composition is bisected. I think one thing I would change is the margin of the "Hello". For me it could have worked on the same margin as the body type. Altogether, I say this is a success.

I remember this in the prelim and I am a fan of it. Someone else had a comment on too much negative space. I think your negative space is perfect. With that being said, I might like the placing of the body text on the web version placed a little differently, but I think the blank space itself is a n...

This layout reminds me of a board game, like each region is going to be a different quest or something. I dig it. I wonder if there could be anything that could be done with an animation to make these geometric areas rotate, or otherwise maybe highlight or enlarge an area that is hovered over. That'...

I love the colors and shapes, but especially the shapes. I really like the stagger look on the web version. I really like how everything works together. I am not sure what I would change, perhaps the mobile menu just a hair bigger. Possibly?

I like the levels you are playing with here with images and text. The one thing I am unsure of is why the font color changed between the two versions.

Cool colors and fonts and nice night Kitty, I like it. A neon-y night vibe going on. If I had to change anything, it would be the buddy copy, with dangling "orphan" words, that is the lines that only have one word on them. I think there might have been a way to give breaks to your paragrap...

Kickass with the UFO and then also I think a shooting star. So awesome. Yeah, this has a cool vibe, it reminds of like either a stylized cover of some 60sci fi novel or actually like an old concert poster from the 60s or 70s. Real tough to pick on anything that I don't like. I don't even know if thi...

This is nice, works and sets a nice connected vibe between the image and the colors, I think it all works nice together. I feel it is cohesive. I like the color palate. I think the adjustments you made really worked. Sometimes I have trouble picking things I think could be improved. If I had to pick...

moble site 1_JPEG-01.jpg site 1 web_JPEG-01.jpg Although a lot of people seemed to like the dog giraffe (and I do too), I went with the "distressed" style version of my concepts. I feel the whimsical jungle version had a lot of potential for animation and textures and to just be really fu...

How can you go wrong with a doggo? So much I like here, all the elements working together, from the logo and the "Hello I am" to the placement of that adorable pupperoni.The only thing I might like differently is bigger body copy on the web design, but all and all I really really like these.