Hi David,
You did a great job executing your project one design. The colors are nice and it has a good grid pattern. My suggestion would be to shift your star that is blocking your body copy.
Overall great work,
Rebekah
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- Tue Nov 05, 2024 4:02 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: project2 final
- Replies: 9
- Views: 97
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 4:00 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project02 Final
- Replies: 9
- Views: 62
Re: Project02 Final
Hi Luke, You did a great job executing your project one design. The layering in your name and on the sticky notes is really cool! My suggestions would be to have the same sized margins all the way around "Home" so the box is even and to have margins/space outside your picture because it's ...
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:53 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02
- Replies: 8
- Views: 55
Re: Project 02
Hi Liam,
You did a great job executing your project one design. Nice job sticking to this style, it's very unique and your site looks like your references.
Overall great job,
Rebekah
You did a great job executing your project one design. Nice job sticking to this style, it's very unique and your site looks like your references.
Overall great job,
Rebekah
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:50 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02? :///
- Replies: 9
- Views: 69
Re: Project 02? :///
Hi Perchy, You did a great job executing your project one design. You had a lot of fun elements in your design that make this unique and you did a great job bringing that into your website. I like the attention to detail with the drop shadows. My only suggestion is to make the overall site a little ...
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:46 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project Two
- Replies: 11
- Views: 66
Re: Project Two
Hi Kim, Great job! This is a really nice website with functioning links, lots of pictures, and a great story. It looks pretty clean and fun and is very intuitive. My only suggestion would be to have a smaller footer, this will hopefully give your type above that more room for visibility. Overall gre...
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:38 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project02 Final
- Replies: 10
- Views: 77
Re: Project02 Final
Hi Emily,
You did a great job executing your project one design! You had a lot to work on and you did a great job making your design come to life!
Rebekah
You did a great job executing your project one design! You had a lot to work on and you did a great job making your design come to life!
Rebekah
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:35 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project 02 final
- Replies: 8
- Views: 71
Re: Project 02 final
Hi Chole,
You did a great job executing your project one design. The layout looks really good! My suggestion would be to either add a background to the type on the top right or to change the color. The red is a bit hard to see with the dark background.
Overall great job!
Rebekah
You did a great job executing your project one design. The layout looks really good! My suggestion would be to either add a background to the type on the top right or to change the color. The red is a bit hard to see with the dark background.
Overall great job!
Rebekah
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:31 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project Two
- Replies: 7
- Views: 59
Re: Project Two
Hi Shasta, You did a great job with the execution of this website! It looks like your original design in project one and each link whether internal or external works great. My only suggestion echos what our professor said and that would be to add margins on your pictures. Overall you did a great job...
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:27 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Poject 2 Final
- Replies: 8
- Views: 40
Re: Poject 2 Final
Hi Miguel, I think your website looks great! You did a really good job of duplicating your original project one design. I think the responsive links are awesome! My advice would be to alter the link so it opens in a new tab after you click it rather than leaving your site to go to the external links...
- Tue Nov 05, 2024 3:23 pm
- Forum: Project Two
- Topic: Project02 Final
- Replies: 8
- Views: 28
Project02 Final
Hi everyone, I know I am late in posting this, but I still wanted to get your feedback and wanted to participate in the critique. My website reflects the design draft I made for one project and I think it will do a great job of portraying my future work in a minimalist style. Although there are stil...