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by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 9:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Final _AJY
Replies: 13
Views: 538

Re: Project One Final _AJY

Hi Ashley! It's a great improvement from your preliminaries, and your font choices make it look much more cohesive!! You could make it more in sync by making the colors in your desktop and mobile designs more similar so you'll have to stick with either your purple or pink color scheme. Nice work!
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 8:19 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 [FINAL]
Replies: 13
Views: 648

Re: Project 1 [FINAL]

Hey Jacobo! I love your designs, it's so much fun to look at from the organized layout to your use of cool colors! I think you're just missing your name in your mobile design. Awesome work Jacobo!!!
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 8:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 12
Views: 438

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Adrian! I think you went with a great for your designs and I'm really loving that blue! I just think the design is a bit too simple and could use some sort of variety, maybe some space between your project links or more visuals that pertain to your interests!
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 7:48 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Final
Replies: 13
Views: 695

Re: Project 01 Final

Hello Allison! Wow, really enjoying your use of hierarchy and how you've overall organized you designs! I think your body copy and email are just too close to the edge of your borders in your desktop versions, but otherwise this a fantastic final design. Nice job!!
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 - FINAL
Replies: 13
Views: 475

Re: Project 01 - FINAL

Hi Jonathan! Really enjoying the look of your final design and the cool colors you used for your design! My one complaint is that your body text is too bold and messes with the hierarchy of your text, you should make it lighter. Nice work! :D
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:40 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 597

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Kendra! I really like how you used hierarchy in your designs, leading from your name right to the links helps tell right where you want us to look! My one critique is that I'd like to see the purple used somewhere else in the design, it stands out a bit too much for me, maybe you could use it for...
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Final
Replies: 14
Views: 675

Re: Project 1 - Final

Hey Fiona! I like the design you did for your final layout, it looks very clean and I like how organized you look! Very smart to use that coral pink to add some contrast to the purple! My only nitpick is that I wish you could incorporate the emojis in your desktop design into your mobile version, it...
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 13
Views: 491

Re: Project 1 Final

Hi Crane! I love the borders you added around your portrait and project links, it adds such a nice touch to the old timey look of your website! One thing I would change is either making all of the text the same shade of brown or different tints of that brown to give it a more cohesive feel. Awesome ...
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Final
Replies: 12
Views: 611

Re: Project 01 Final

Hi Jose! I like how clean your final design turned out! I really enjoy the image you chose to represent your site and the cool colors go very well with it! One thing I would change is that your body text in both your mobile and desktop designs are a bit small which makes it hard to read, so needs to...
by luciyote
Fri Mar 14, 2025 1:17 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 FINAL
Replies: 11
Views: 501

Re: Project 1 FINAL

Hi Kai! Wow, you final design is so fun!! The arrows really help lead the eye and I love the doodle you added in!! Such a nice character! One thing I would change is making your project link texts just a bit heavier, I feel like they can get a bit lost in the thicker dotted line enclosing them. Grea...