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- Tue Feb 18, 2025 4:23 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Preliminary
- Replies: 9
- Views: 75
Re: Project01 Preliminary
Hi Adrian, I really like the personal designs you went with here. They're both unique in their own way and show off your personality. The wide variety of themes is also visually eye-catching and adds a subtle story to it. The visual graphics also look pretty great! One thing I would recommend though...
- Mon Feb 17, 2025 1:51 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 145
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Quentin, I love the way you arranged the font for your name, it’s very striking and adds to the visual hierarchy. The way the name goes across your eyes is also a nice touch. However for the first mobile layout your name is kind of hard to make out being in the middle of the page and body text. A...
- Sun Feb 16, 2025 3:28 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Prelim
- Replies: 11
- Views: 121
Re: Project 01 Prelim
Hello Kimberly, I love the night city life atmosphere you went with for the first layout. The blue and purple combined together add a very modern feel to it, and it really transport the viewer to your mindset. I like the funky font you’ve chosen for the lily pad design as well. I do think though you...
- Sat Feb 15, 2025 1:57 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary
- Replies: 10
- Views: 129
Re: Project One Preliminary
Hello Ryan, I really like the font you used for the second layout. The slash through the name feels action packed, and has a bigger presence from the larger stroke. I feel as though you would benefit from adding a third color to the website, perhaps through the text boxes or some additional graphics...
- Sat Feb 15, 2025 1:51 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 01 preliminary
- Replies: 12
- Views: 122
Re: project 01 preliminary
Hey Damiano, I like the way you arranged the tabs for both designs. How the tabs extend past the graphic adds alot to the design. I do like the layout with the darker tones, as I feel the green and yellow color palettes for the other set is rather harsh on the eyes. But overall, the ease of use for ...
- Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:39 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One - preliminary
- Replies: 11
- Views: 106
Re: Project One - preliminary
Hello Ashley, I love the overall aesthetic of both layouts, it’s giving out a lot of fantasy vibes and shows off a lot of your personal touches. I also like how you experimented with different shapes and text boxes. One thing I would recommend would be making the body text more legible with a differ...
- Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 11
- Views: 182
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Kendra, I like the personal touches you’ve added to your designs, such as the drawing and the notebook design. The cohesiveness in the shoe layout looks great. For the notebook, I would suggest maybe adding the same amount of holes to either the desktop or mobile design for continuity. Great vari...
- Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 - Preliminary
- Replies: 10
- Views: 138
Re: Project 1 - Preliminary
Hi Fiona, I love the color palettes and images you’ve added to these designs. Gives a lot of added character to the website. The first layout with the graphics for the tabs is a nice touch, and keeps it organized. I would suggest maybe enlarging the font however for easier legibility. The jellyfish ...
- Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:13 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Preliminary Work
- Replies: 11
- Views: 104
Re: Project01 Preliminary Work
Hi Lucio! I love how you explore both ideas of the field guide and the cork board. They both give off the vibe you were going for. I agree with you that the first set needs to have the type tilted. As for the second set, perhaps adding a border around it would add more of the cork board look. You co...
- Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 - Preliminary
- Replies: 12
- Views: 142
Re: Project 01 - Preliminary
Hi Jonnathan, I love the graphics for all three roughs. You really experimented with the images and borders, and the color palettes. They all have their distinct flow to them and it shows. Personally, I do like the rough with the blue overlay, as it unites your image with the rest of the website. Th...